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Write a topic sentence about a time when you were scared or afraid.

1. One time I went to the store with my sister. REVISED: One time I was scared when my sister frightened me.

2. On Halloween me and my brothers went to our friend's house. REVISED: On Halloween I was scared when I went to my friend's house. REVISED: You'll never guess what scared me one Halloween when I went to my friend's house!!

3. First, I went to sleep and I dreamed. REVISED: You'll never guess what scared me one time when I went to sleep.

4. The time when I was scared. REVISED: One time I was really, really scared.

5. At twilight, my mom and dad drove to get me something and I was all alone. REVISED: At twilight, my mom and dad drove to get me something and I was very afraid. REVISED:One time when my mom and dad left me in the car and I was scared. REVISED: At twilight, my parents left me alone and I was scared.

6. One day I was reading my reading log for my homework. REVISED: Something scary happened to me when I was reading my book.

7. Once I was in Mexico bored so I went walking all over the place. REVISED: Once I was in Mexico bored and something scary happened. REVISED: Once I was in Mexico bored and I saw something scary!

8. Once I was scared. REVISED: You'll never believe what scared me on Halloween!